As the name states……..it’s only a draft…….the major changes have to do with the figures in the foreground. Some of their proportions are off…(either to long or to short)...or slightly distorted (the chest position of the left most figure). And frankly, their poses are way too stiff and rigid. They need to appear a little looser (the right most figure)…but only a little. Anyway those are just some of the changes needed..the most obvious ones..for the list goes on and on……………I’ll explain what it’s about when I post the completed sketch.
2 comments:
I agree with your corrections, but its still very good
thanks, and its always nice to see you blogging too
what you said is true...and yes, love is very important..Self II will get a little more important ourselves
Beautiful sketch, it is even more beautiful in person.
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